Learning Outcome 2 (Integrating Sources)

While integrating sources in the past I would simply quote the author to back up my claim, offering little to no explanation and analysis of the quote itself. This semester I have learned how to broaden my horizon by using the Barclay paragraph. A Barclay paragraph is basically a structured way of writing that helps you clearly make a claim, back it up with evidence, explain why that evidence matters, and tie it all together so your point actually lands. You can also use two different sources, creating a triangle of ideas between source #1, source #2, and yourself. Think of it as a conversation and you’re bouncing ideas off each other. Incorporating more than one source in your Barclay can make your argument deeper by showing the reader that your argument is a common conversation. By using my voice as well as voice from a source it makes my argument more compelling to the reader and backs up my own idea with credible information from experts. Using this structure forces me to show the connection between my point and the evidence, which makes my writing come across as more intentional and organized. Not only does this help the reader understand my argument better, but it also strengthens my confidence as a writer because I’m explaining my reasoning instead of hiding behind someone else’s words. I have found the Barclay formula incredibly useful while writing my two essays this semester, using it in both.